# Specific Proof

> Names and numbers, next to the claim.

- Section: Marketing
- URL: https://critly.vercel.app/specific-proof
- Published: 2026-10-14
- Source: https://github.com/kausthubh-coder/critly/blob/main/content/marketing/specific-proof.mdx

"This tool changed how our team works," says Sarah K. Under the quote, a row
of grey logos. Readers have seen that block on so many pages that they skip
it. Nothing in it can be checked, so it adds nothing to the page.

**On a page that persuades, put proof right next to the claim it backs, and make it specific enough to check: a named person with their role and company, or a number with its baseline and timeframe, because praise nobody can check reads as filler.**

> **Interactive demo: Specific Proof.** Open https://critly.vercel.app/specific-proof to try it.

Turn the details on one at a time. A name alone does little, since anyone can
type a name. A number alone raises a question: 18% of what, down from where?
The number starts to mean something once the baseline is there, and the role
and company tell readers whether the result could apply to them.

## Specific means checkable

People expect a company to quote only its happiest customers. In Nielsen
Norman Group's research on [trustworthy design](https://www.nngroup.com/articles/trustworthy-design/),
participants treated a site's own testimonials with "a healthy dose of
skepticism" and trusted reviews on outside sites more. Buyers go and look:
in Wynter's survey of 100 B2B SaaS marketing leaders, [81% check third-party
reviews](https://learn.g2.com/how-b2b-saas-marketing-leaders-buy-software-in-2024)
before they buy software. That is a survey of one kind of buyer, not a test,
but it agrees with what NN/g saw.

So proof on your own page works when it survives that check. A full name, a
role and a company can be looked up. A number with a baseline can be compared
with the reader's own. Linking to where the proof lives, such as a review site
profile, a case study or a public changelog, shows you expect to be checked.
It's Harry Dry's [second test](https://www.demandcurve.com/newsletters/growth-newsletter-202)
for copy: can you prove it false? Vague praise can't be proved false, so it
proves nothing.

Don't count on specific words simply sounding truer. A 2010 lab study found
that concretely worded statements were judged more likely to be true, and a
preregistered replication found the effect [much smaller](https://forrt.org/flora-replication-atlas/doi/10.1177/0146167210386238/)
than first reported. Details help because a reader can test them and can tell
whether the result fits their situation. Specific wording on its own doesn't
fool anyone.

## A number needs its baseline

"Saved 40%" leaves out of what, compared with what, over how long, and for
whom. Give the number its baseline (from 31% to 18%), its unit, its timeframe
(in the first quarter) and its source (one fleet of 42 trucks). A modest
number with all four tells the reader more than a large round one with none.
If the figure is one customer's result, say so. If it's an average, say
across how many.

Pick proof from customers who look like the reader. A dispatcher at a
42-truck fleet is better proof for the next 40-truck fleet than a famous logo
that used one feature once.

## Put it next to the claim

A reader doubts a claim at the moment they read it. A quote about speed
belongs beside the speed claim, and a quote about setup belongs beside the
setup steps. A testimonials section at the bottom makes the reader remember
which claim each quote was answering. This is reasoning about how people
read, not a measured result, but it follows from the same idea as
[sections that follow questions](https://critly.vercel.app/sections-follow-questions): each section
answers one question, and its proof answers "does it work for people like
me?"

The same goes for logos. A logo says a company uses the product, not for what
or how much. A logo with one line under it, such as "Ridgeline Freight, 600
loads a week", does the work the bare logo can't.

## Never make it up

A page built before there are customers has no testimonials, and an agent
building one is tempted to invent them. Don't. Invented quotes are the
generic content readers have learned to skip, and in the US the FTC's 2024
rule [bans testimonials](https://www.ftc.gov/news-events/news/press-releases/2024/08/federal-trade-commission-announces-final-rule-banning-fake-reviews-testimonials)
from people who don't exist, AI-generated ones included. Use what is real: a
benchmark with its method, the number of teams in the beta, the founder's own
results, the product itself running on the page (see
[show the product](https://critly.vercel.app/show-the-product)). Where the real proof isn't in yet,
mark the spot in the code and tell the owner what's missing, as you would for
any [real content](https://critly.vercel.app/real-content) you don't have. Readers should never see a
to-do note where the proof will go.

## Resources

- [Trustworthy design](https://www.nngroup.com/articles/trustworthy-design/): Nielsen Norman Group on what makes a site credible. Participants met a company's own testimonials with skepticism and trusted reviews on outside sites more.
- [How B2B SaaS marketing leaders buy software](https://learn.g2.com/how-b2b-saas-marketing-leaders-buy-software-in-2024): G2 on Wynter's survey of 100 B2B SaaS marketing leaders. 81% check third-party reviews when vetting software, and 73% weigh word of mouth most.
- [Harry Dry's three copy tests](https://www.demandcurve.com/newsletters/growth-newsletter-202): Can you picture it, can you prove it false, and could nobody else say it. The second test is the one proof has to pass.
- [Concrete wording and truth, replicated](https://forrt.org/flora-replication-atlas/doi/10.1177/0146167210386238/): The FORRT replication atlas entry for Hansen and Wänke (2010). A preregistered replication found the "concrete sounds truer" effect much smaller than first reported.
- [FTC rule on fake reviews and testimonials](https://www.ftc.gov/news-events/news/press-releases/2024/08/federal-trade-commission-announces-final-rule-banning-fake-reviews-testimonials): The 2024 US rule that bans testimonials from people who don't exist, including AI-generated ones, or that misstate a real person's experience.
